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Love You by ~luciferismyhomeboy:iconluciferismyhomeboy:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


You seem so sad when I
See your words.
Your broken heart spread
Bear for the whole world to see.
The remanants of pain
Splashed all over the plain white
Paper, tainting the purity that
Is lost in you.

I feel so helpless when I read your poetry
It makes me want to take
You into my arms and hold you.
Although I've never seen you face to face.
But this mixture of melancholy
Metaphors and similies  
Makes me want to tell you that
I love you.

Because I know you need to hear
At least one person say it.
Even from me, a perfect stranger,
It could be even more beautiful
And meaningful than your true love
Telling you, I love you.
Because you can guarantee that
I will never let you down.

My love will be pure and platonic
But still the love you crave.
Free love given to you.
I don't even need to know your flaws
Or bad habits, all I need to
Know is that you are okay.
To see the beauty in your words.

And if only you forgot about everyone else
All the sadness and pain
That has been dealt to you.
And you would be able to see
All the beauty that everyone else does,
If only you opened your eyes
And looked.
©2008-2009 ~luciferismyhomeboy
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Random poetry after reading a selection of really depressing but beautiful poetry.
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~Dorthu:iconDorthu: Apr 25, 2008, 2:46:05 PM
Well now, that's a bit more upbeat than usual for ya...it's good though. Hopefully they'll understand your message, it's sweet :)

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~luciferismyhomeboy:iconluciferismyhomeboy: Apr 25, 2008, 11:16:12 PM
lol thanks hun :hug:

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" I don't mean to sound bitter, cold, or cruel, but I am, so that's how it comes out. " Bill Hicks
:rofl:
~CrimsonCravenheart:iconCrimsonCravenheart: Apr 29, 2008, 5:43:08 AM
its a very beautiful poem, full of such emotion and love....whose poetry were you reading?

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I’m running out of morphine lies to tell you
And the truth will hurt more
The lies are a band aid with side effects
And I’m on overdose

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~luciferismyhomeboy:iconluciferismyhomeboy: Apr 29, 2008, 10:56:53 AM
erm.... :iconinrealityimcrying: its beautiful in a twisted sort of way.

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" I don't mean to sound bitter, cold, or cruel, but I am, so that's how it comes out. " Bill Hicks
:rofl:
~inrealityimcrying:iconinrealityimcrying: May 8, 2008, 8:22:45 AM
I LOVE YOU :tears:

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"I'm only laughing on the outside my smile is just skin deep if you could see inside I'm really crying you might join me for a weep."
~luciferismyhomeboy:iconluciferismyhomeboy: May 13, 2008, 10:51:22 AM
:D thank you :glomp: love you to :hug:

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" I don't mean to sound bitter, cold, or cruel, but I am, so that's how it comes out. " Bill Hicks
:rofl:
~inrealityimcrying:iconinrealityimcrying: May 13, 2008, 11:27:14 AM
:D :hug:

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"I'm only laughing on the outside my smile is just skin deep if you could see inside I'm really crying you might join me for a weep."
Mood: Lonely ~aquagirl7:iconaquagirl7: Feb 19, 2009, 8:54:44 AM
this is so beautiful! i wish someone would do that for me.......TT^TT *hugs* you are an amazing writer!

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If all other feelings fail me, I still have pain to know that I'm alive.
~luciferismyhomeboy:iconluciferismyhomeboy: Feb 19, 2009, 11:05:20 AM
lol, thanks :D i'd forgotten about that poem lol thanks for the fave :hug:

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"You're like my favourite brand of heroin" - Edward Cullen
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